Nice.
That was good, I liked the humor and the little things you put in the background, like when he was saying his gf worked for him already, hahah. Anyways, I think its really good, the animation is kinda jumpy at times, but other than that its great. Keep up the good work! :D
Haa haa, yeah... I try to smooth it out as much as I can... even after 2 years I'm still gettin' the hang of Flash. Thanks a lot!
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This is pretty good. But, the mouths dont line up to the words and its reallly annoying. As for the other reviewer who said this was propaganda, DUH, He said so in his comment! If it makes you feel better, I doubt you were his target audience though. Good job on the flash, fix the mouths next time though :)
Did ya think that dude actually realised it was a recruiting vid?? anyway cheers for the review. I changed my style completely for this one to cater more for the people who will end up watching it. thanks again
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Well I hate to say it but...this looks an awful lot like Tomorrows Nobodies...I mean you even do basicaly the same thing in the opening credits they do and the whole topic seems to be quite similar. Also, when the guy walked in his legs didnt move..bouncing up and down is ok if you dont show their legs, but if you do, they should move...at least a little, how much more work could it be? And the second guy's head seems to misteriously change direction...You should show it moving or something and usualy when some ones talking they look at the person they're talking to. All things you could improve pretty easily...so do it next episode :)
I will improve on things for sure, the funny thing is that I wasn't thinking of TN at all! I haven't seen those toons in such a long time and whats funny to me is that my character "Dave" looks similar to "David" from TN. Maybe that name just goes well with rocker guys. lol
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The Failures - Episode 1